Hello!
Thanks for all the positive feedback on the story. You’ll be pleased to know that this is the last instalment.
If this is your first visit, welcome! and you will need to have read the other Chapters to have any idea what is going on. So;
You can read Part 1 here
You can read Part 2 here
You can read Part 3 here
Enjoy Part 4 – Durham Station
David stood on the platform of Durham Station. He had been told to wait on the Platform and Father Sidney would meet him there. The cold air was a treat. The train pulled away, the whine of the engines increasing as the power fed in. Other passengers scuttled past, hunched against the mid-winter coldness.
He was relieved to be off the train. The journey had been awkward, uncomfortable. But he knew that he could control it now. Needed to find where he could score in a few days time. Just a couple of times a week to be getting on with.
He had left Aquinas on the Carriage table and wondered momentarily who would pick the book up and whether they would have the mental capacity to understand the learning’s contained within its hallowed covers. He did not really care.
The heroin made him feel good about himself and knew that his spiritual awakening leaned more in this direction rather than the teachings of a medieval scribe. He could manage his addiction to assist his spiritual growth.
He felt happy but also felt himself a liar. But he would live with these contradictions. Life is about choices.
A man walked towards him. He was in his fifties and wore a heavy wool overcoat. He was a heavyset and walked with a certainty of purpose. He waved towards David, who assuming this to be Father Sidney, his chaperone walked towards him.
They smiled at each other and shook hands. “Father David!” Sidney beamed. His grip was firm. Perhaps a touch too firm David thought. He looked familiar, but David couldn’t place him.
“Good Trip?”
“Yes, thanks,” David replied, “I don’t mean to be rude, but have we met somewhere before?”
“A few months ago. I was the one who found you.”
“Oh. I see.” Even in the cold of the winter’s night David felt himself flush.
“Don’t be embarrassed,” Sidney said, “We all have the ability to err. It is our ability to admit our failures and overcome them that mark us out as Human. Besides, Father Stephen tells me he has every confidence in you making a full recovery and he is the best judge of character I know. He is impressed with your strength of purpose. But, we’d better hurry. I haven’t bought a ticket for the car park.”
They arrived at the car and got in. The bitter cold was painful and David was glad to be inside once again.
“Did Father Stephen have a letter for me?” Sidney asked.
“Oh yes. Sorry. I forgot.” David reached into his jacket and handed Sidney the letter. He opened it and read, humming “Welcome Home” as he did so. He folded the letter, returned it to the envelope and threw it on the dashboard.
“Just the instructions for your time with us here. You’ve had a long day, so we will do the first blood test tomorrow. Nothing to worry about.”
“Thanks.”
He had forgotten.
You’re banging these out GFB, I have a lot of blog catching up to do this weekend!
Cheers Joe – been away?
Nah, just drunk for a few weeks.
Excellent little twisty ending – like that. For a minute I thought he was in a loop because of the train stations and then i realised your priests just have an aversion to car park tickets
Cheers Fred – I had him in a loop at one point but thought a crisper end would be better and leave the Dante stuff well alone.
Well I’m glad to read I picked up a hint of it – but you know personally I do like a good twist. Not like the twist in Lost though. That was shit. More like in A Beautiful Mind – that kind of twist, you just don’t see it coming…
I enjoyed your story. It was very good.
Thanks very much
You’re welcome. It was so original and surprising at the end. Kudos.
Great work, Jim.
I envy your talent.
Cheers Hook glad you enjoyed it!
Busted! Love it!
Will there be more parts?
He’s done for the time being thanks Susie – I’ll give him a year or so and see where he is then. Got a few more ideas to explore now, your scars post gave me an idea!
There you go!
I feel like I’ve just finished Season 1 of this story, and am waiting for Season 2!
Cheers – yeah it looks like he’ll be back!
Well done throughout, thanks.
Thanks Michael – appreciate you taking the time to read it.
Oh my! I do want the next installment, but in many ways, brilliantly concluded. The stories that stay with me the longest, books or movies, leave me with questions. Jim, I saw early in the week that you had a series coming and I didn’t want to read it quickly and “in between” the way I do so much of my reading during the workweek. I am so glad I waited to give this full attention. It is a wonderfully written, and challenging story. You have so much ability and I think you remain a bit of a mystery to me. LOL! Sausages…and this! Just awesome!
Most kind Debra – I enjoyed writing it over Easter and the added length helps develop the narrative. Always good to be a bit mysterious – back to sausages, Aunty Bill, Oily Geroge et al for a while now – but this has given me a few more ideas. Perhaps it will involve a tar pit or two!
Interesting photo! Thanks for sharing. Any more parts? Thanks for stopping by my blog.
That’s it for him now – but looks like I will have to write a sequel!
Yes a sequel would be awesome. http://www.segmation.wordpress.com
That is too funny. Did you used to watch Father Ted?
Yes!
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This story is haunting. I would like to know more but fear the worse. This series was certainly a gift to your followers. Thank you.
Thanks Michelle – glad you enjoyed the read and found the time to comment on each part. I loved putting this together.
Compelling, Jim!
Cheers Kate!
Wow! Perfect ending and not a wasted word in the series. You really do have a gift for storytelling, Jim. Very nicely done.
thanks for all the comments Sandy – most appreciated – can i ask about your pile of dirt?
My big pile of dirt is a little less than half its original size though the shoveling of said dirt has halted for a few days while I tend to an elderly, blind, incontinent and slightly senile cocker spaniel – the joys of petsitting!
Wish him well!
Wikced excellent piece of writing. Really enjoyed it. Powerful, haunting yet laced with dark humour and the unveiling of the human spirit behind the pious robes. Not that they haven’t done a good job of undressing themselves recently.
I was put onto you by ‘theliterarygangster’ and my favourite piece form her was also a series. I found I really took the time to emerse myself in the story.
Well done keep it going
Many thanks – buoyed piecing it together in this way
This was awesome! Brilliantly written.
Thanks Joe